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Off Topic => Everything Else => Topic started by: Autosaver on December 27, 2010, 09:20:02 pm
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http://forums.sega.com/showthread.php?3 ... ements-%29 (http://forums.sega.com/showthread.php?355516-Sega-All-Stars-Racing-Review-%28Please-help-find-errors-Improvements-%29)
That is my review.
I'm wondering if anyone could point out flaws or just something I could add to make it better.
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More Periods than there should be. Could just be your style of writing.
Try using ;
They are useful.